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Top 10 Common Resume Blunders

Top 10 Common Resume Blunders

Kim Isaacs | monster.com

Make sure your resume is in top-notch shape by avoiding the top 10 resume blunders:

1. Too Focused on Job Duties

Your resume should not be a boring list of job duties and responsibilities. Go beyond showing what was required and demonstrate how you made a difference at each company, providing specific examples. When developing your achievements, ask yourself:

• How did you perform the job better than others?

• What were the problems or challenges faced? How did you overcome them? What were the results? How did the company benefit from your performance?

• Did you receive any awards, special recognitions or promotions as a result?

2. Flowery or General Objective Statement

Many candidates lose their readers in the beginning. Statements such as “a challenging position enabling me to contribute to organizational goals while offering an opportunity for growth and advancement” are overused, too general and waste valuable space. If you’re on a career track, replace the objective with a tagline stating what you do or your expertise.

3. Too Short or Too Long

Many people try to squeeze their experiences onto one page, because they’ve heard resumes shouldn’t be longer. By doing this, job seekers may delete impressive achievements. Other candidates ramble on about irrelevant or redundant experiences. There is no rule about appropriate resume length. When writing your resume, ask yourself, “Will this statement help me land an interview?” Every word should sell you, so include only the information that elicits a “yes.”

4. Using Personal Pronouns and Articles

A resume is a form of business communication, so it should be concise and written in a telegraphic style. There should be no mentions of “I” or “me,” and only minimal use of articles. For example:

“I developed a new product that added $2 million in sales and increased the market segment’s gross margin by 12%.”

Should be changed to:

“Developed new product that added $2 million in sales and increased market segment’s gross margin by 12%.”

5. Listing Irrelevant Information

Many people include their interests, but they should include only those relating to the job. For example, if a candidate is applying for a position as a ski instructor, he should list cross-country skiing as a hobby.

Personal information, such as date of birth, marital status, height and weight, normally should not be on the resume unless you’re an entertainment professional or job seeker outside the US.


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  • Dscf1906_max50

    Sphynx

    26 days ago

    2 comments

    I have 10 years of employment history on my resume (even though I have 18 years total history) . It seems not to be an issue but i am still wondering if I could be considered not having enough years experience because the prospective employer literally takes it as I have only been working since Dec 1998?( I do not include the date I graduated from college. The outplacement service my most recent former employer sent me to when I was laid off told all of us not to include graduation dates in the education section of your resume)

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    Inspire2009

    about 1 month ago

    2 comments

    I think getting rid of the generics is good and I love that I dont have to make up an objective anymore...I always did think it repetitive and wasteful. Objective: I need a job that will pay for housing, childcare and travel expenses!!! I mean, let's get real!
    I would also like to get feedback on the whole issue of having pockets of experience as I do-
    Ive been an HR administrator, Self-employed Painter, Mother and most recently, a County Employee. Im currently applying for Grad school under Clinical Psych, but my contract w/the county is up at the end of this year.
    Any suggestions on a better, more succinct way to sell my abilities and skill set would be awesome!

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    pljames4

    3 months ago

    2 comments

    the information is going to help me sale myself in a better way. thanks alot

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    kennelyn

    3 months ago

    10 comments

    thanks for the additional knoweldge...

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    Shilpa

    4 months ago

    20 comments

    Thanks for the tips .It's really helpful.

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    jkaddi

    6 months ago

    50 comments

    My boyfriend is transferring from the military to the corporate civilian world. Any advice on how he might be able to brush up on his resume? Are there any resources he should look into, i.e. books, etc. Thank you! :)

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    justangie

    6 months ago

    10 comments

    good tips on resumes Ineed to update my resume

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    lmenlo

    7 months ago

    4 comments

    2 aspects of resumes: 1. your strengths and what you bring to the position;
    2. your experience both in terms of work and life. When reading resumes, it is important to include your unique strengths. So often people just list work experience and education. Both are important when seen in light of who you are.

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    sboyd6658

    7 months ago

    2 comments

    This advice is well and good; however, it would assist people more if you gave actual samples of a "bad" resume and a "good" resume. I do not mean resumes that generalize, but rather actual resumes that one could actually follow, i.e, administrative assistant, general clerk, secretary, data entry clerk, maintenance person, tech support, human resources personnel, nurse, etc.

    Stating a list of things "to do" and "not to do" is really too abstract to help.

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    Andi

    8 months ago

    6 comments

    I always wondered about the pronouns and articles! thanks for clearing that up - I have some changes to make!

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    AdaRoberts

    8 months ago

    4 comments

    Very helpful since I am looking for a job

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    PreciousTuvya

    8 months ago

    54 comments

    extremely helpful, Thanks!

  • Debbie_max50

    debbie922

    9 months ago

    6 comments

    Great suggestions!

  • Coz_jane_on_beach_2_max50

    Heres_Hoping08

    10 months ago

    36 comments

    As an observation: I see two specific differences between what I'd been taught and what's current. I was taught that the resume could be "generic" but the cover letter should be different for each company. The other is that a resume was supposed to fit on one page.

    It seems the practice of scanning resumes makes a lot of difference.

    Then again, I've always worked at small offices. My last job application was a state job, which is different, anyway.

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    fatimah

    10 months ago

    88 comments

    This is very helpful. Now i am going to make few cahnges in my own resume and see.
    Thanks for sharing!

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