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Avoid the Top 10 Resume Blunders

Avoid the Top 10 Resume Blunders

Designing a resume can be tedious. But what if your resume is tedious to read?

Peter Vogt / Monster.com

November 02, 2007

6. A Bad Objective

Employers do read your resume’s objective statement, but too often they plow through vague pufferies like, “Seeking a challenging position that offers professional growth.” Give employers something specific and, more importantly, something that focuses on their needs as well as your own. Example: “A challenging entry-level marketing position that allows me to contribute my skills and experience in fund-raising for nonprofits.”

7. No Action Verbs

Avoid using phrases like “responsible for.” Instead, use action verbs: “Resolved user questions as part of an IT help desk serving 4,000 students and staff.”

8. Leaving Off Important Information

You may be tempted, for example, to eliminate mention of the jobs you’ve taken to earn extra money for school. Typically, however, the soft skills you’ve gained from these experiences (e.g., work ethic, time management) are more important to employers than you might think.

9. Visually Too Busy

If your resume is wall-to-wall text featuring five different fonts, it will most likely give the employer a headache. So show your resume to several other people before sending it out. Do they find it visually attractive? If what you have is hard on the eyes, revise.

10. Incorrect Contact Information

I once worked with a student whose resume seemed incredibly strong, but he wasn’t getting any bites from employers. So one day, I jokingly asked him if the phone number he’d listed on his resume was correct. It wasn’t. Once he changed it, he started getting the calls he’d been expecting. Moral of the story: Double-check even the most minute, taken-for-granted details – sooner rather than later.


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    wjndesigns

    8 months ago

    5052 comments

    good info.

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    StormKnight

    about 1 year ago

    134 comments

    I'm with Navy1wife!! I made the decision to go back to school to pursue my dream job as a filmmaker and video producer. The schooling has been wonderful and I wouldn't trade it again for anything but I've had so many other "little" jobs just to get through school til if I listed them all it'd look like I'm all over the place. My school schedule is a little lighter now and I'd like to get back to being the outstanding AAII that I am. Any suggestions on how to bring up 8 years of AA experience after a 4 year break???

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    Elorraine

    about 1 year ago

    824 comments

    Boy! I have seen some very poor resumes and sure enough I put them in file 13, why waste time to peruse nonsence.

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    navy1wife

    about 1 year ago

    6 comments

    I cannot tell you how much I hate writing my resume. I've have drafted it so many times because everyone I ask has a different opinion about it. HELP!
    I appreciate the article because I'm job hunting for an MA position and it's hard to find- especially as a newbie. I haven't had to look for a job in 3 yrs. These past few months seem to be dragging on forever. Any suggestions on cover letters?

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    aspiring2begreat

    about 1 year ago

    8 comments

    You are correct. As a professional resume writer, I have seen my share of recycled resumes. The fact is that today's marketplace is becoming increasingly competitive. You need to stand above the rest. If you're becoming tongue-tied and you just can't seem to put it together, please feel free to contact me. Visit www.georgiafreelancewriters.com for more information.

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    marlamb

    about 1 year ago

    4 comments

    Seems that I'm in the same situation as Kpoage - thanks for the information above.

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    Kpoage

    about 1 year ago

    14 comments

    Thank you for this artical. I am in the depths of job hunting right now- and I was wondering why I wasn't getting as many people calling me as I thought I should (ratio of sending out 30- getting 3 calls back). I will go forth and fix!

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    Deanna

    about 1 year ago

    2 comments

    I have a ( as in 1) resume, so this was obviously helpful because I learned that it is important to customize per potential employer. Now I'll have to rethink my resume.

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    lee

    about 1 year ago

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    Always, always ...use action verbs to highlight your accomplishments. I have an accomplishment 'checklist', that is my bible, that I follow each year to review my accomplishments. Prospective employers want to know what 'value' you brought to your employer, in respect to improvement initiatives, problem solving, revenue growth, savings, or increased efficiency. Toot your own horn. You can find a list on the web of action verbs to translate the skills you bring to the table into the value you will bring to the new employer. If anyone is interested in this checklist, let me know.

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    awinhold

    about 1 year ago

    90 comments

    This is great info. Always have someone proof read it as well. Get honest opinions. See if they would hire based off your resume.

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    Kaamna

    about 1 year ago

    76 comments

    #9 sounds so trivial but is so important - anything that is difficult to read will get passed over in a hurry, no matter how good the content.

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